Jack Commer, Supreme Commander
Book Two of The Jack Commer Series

a novel by Michael D. Smith

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Publication

The first book of the Jack Commer series, The Martian Marauders, has been published by Double Dragon Publishing (January 2012).  The second and third books, Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, and Nonprofit Ladies, have also been accepted for publication by Double Dragon Publishing.

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Synopsis

Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, USSFJack Commer leads a peace mission in his flagship Typhoon II to end the war with Alpha Centauri, but the crew is beset with Star Drive anxiety and an engine explosion strands the ship 393 billion miles from its destination.

Ship’s engineer and physician Phil Sperry debates whether to confess his secret love for Jack’s wife Amav to the gentle and understanding Dar, emperor of the Martians.

The Typhoon rescues human refugees from the war, but they fill the crew with unease. Navigation Officer Will Connors abruptly Converts to worship of the Alpha Centaurian emperor.

Jack’s diary records the previous month and a half of crew Conversions. Three remaining Nonconverted are confined to the Typhoon proper, while the blissfully Converted refugees, USSF crew, and Martians have full run of the luxurious attached Pod. Jacks knows his mission has failed and that humanity itself is at risk of being absorbed into the Alpha Centaurian Grid.

Amav’s diary describes her mistaken marriage to the petulant child Jack. Phil’s diary describes his Conversion and his reluctant acquiescence in a plot to kill the captain.

Twelve year-old Bobby, an emotionally damaged refugee, writes a story about a boy and girl stranded on an alien planet. Disgusted at the story’s sexuality, Jack barricades himself in the Control Room.  But after flooding the ship with death rays to kill two Converted attackers, he realizes the damage he’s done to his marriage with Amav.

Centaurian stormtroopers take the Typhoon II, killing several captives before hauling the rest off to face the dismembered Centaurian Crab Emperor, who sentences Jack and Amav to the Maximum Centaurian Torture.

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Background

The novels The Martian Marauders and its sequel, Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, remained in draft form as I moved onto other novels, and I didn’t begin to think of them as forming part of a series until the Commer universe invaded my novel Nonprofit Ladies. I then did thorough revisions of the first two novels to make them congruent with Nonprofit Ladies.

I’m pleased with the final Jack Commer. It seems to be a theater piece, complete in itself. There are only four settings: the Typhoon II, the Pod, the Emperor’s Receiving Hall, and the torture planet. This novel would be easy to stage, the characters incubating in these spaces.

An older novel I have no plans to resurrect, Parts I and II, was an energetic, sprawling “ideological mess,” but it had an interesting centerpiece where a character newly converted to “Evil” participates in a stonoid plan to kill the commanding officer of his army company. I lifted that scene for Typhoon II ship’s engineer Phil Sperry in this novel.

An ancient dream of the writhing, dismembered Crab Emperor provided a central image for Jack Commer.

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Characters

Jack Commer
Typhoon II Pilot

Joe Commer
Typhoon II Copilot

Amav Frankston-Commer
Jack’s wife and planetary engineer

Dar
Emperor of the Martians

Phil Sperry
Typhoon II engineer and physician

Bobby Athens
Twelve year-old refugee from a captured Centaurian warship

Polot
Ship’s Archivist aboard the thirty-five mile-long Imperial Flagship GnlSaljPraraq

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MS. Info

Finished:

2012

Chapters:

18

MS.:

228 pages (Times New Roman 12, double-spaced)

Words:

59,026

Currently input in:

Word 2000

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Contents

1. Jack’s Anxiety
2. Borman
3. Star Drive at 14:46
4. The Dar Symphony
5. The Limits of Three-Martian Amplified Thought
6. R’mrel’lasktm’uu

7. Refugees
8. Jack’s Diary
9. Amav’s Diary
10. Phil’s Diary
11. Bobby’s Diary
12. Daily Addendum by Ship’s Captain

13. This is Strictly a Family Matter!
14. Clopt and Company
15. Let’s All Wallow in Mental Illness
16. The Grid
17. The Execution
18. The Radiators

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